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My entry for this little collaboration oscardarla.tumblr.com/post/133…
It's few months old and I completely forgot about it... it was also a really, really quick drawing so there's a ton of errors.
sill... I don't see why I shouldn't post it here.
and yes, the background, again, is a quicky.
It's few months old and I completely forgot about it... it was also a really, really quick drawing so there's a ton of errors.
sill... I don't see why I shouldn't post it here.
and yes, the background, again, is a quicky.
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Technique
Impact
Vision + Originality: Fairly simple. Doesn't show much, and pose is rather generic. I like body to leg length ratio. Head feels a little small, but that may be my personal preference. I'd also try making 'secondaries' (lower feathers of closer-to-body half of the wing) larger, or 'primaries' smaller.
Technique: I like 'northern lights' (or at least I think that's it), but sometimes a lot is too much. I'd tone down a little to show that night sky, which could also use about 20% less stars. Luna feels a little 2D, especially with her front right leg. It could be helped with light hitting the chest and less defining lineart. Mane is great.
Impact: Not much to say. I like the picture overall.