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another part of my Vampire ponies series. enjoy
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Brilliance of rising sun felt like thousands of white-hot needles piercing Rainbow's skin and eyes, but she didn't want to move, or cover her eyes. Sorrow filled her heart as she looked at melting shadows over the Everfree forest. The beauty of a rising sun, something she usually slept through during her life, now was lost to this painful ordeal she forced herself to endure. She didn't even know why. Even after a long talk with her friends and the Princess, anger and confusion still filled most of her head. She trusted Twilight and still did, but with all the things that had happened, she felt betrayed and even a little scared--not that she would admit it to anyone. She looked to her side, where Twilight was standing in the burning, painful light of the day. Her face was calm like a stone, but the pegasus could see her muscles shiver underneath the lavender coat. A single tear run down Twilight's cheek. Rainbow Dash knew exactly what was going through Twilight's mind. The pain she felt, although harmless, was a reminder of what she did... a punishment from a mentor she betrayed.
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ardashir Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
So they're like Dracula*-vampires; the sunlight doesn't kill them, but it hurts and weakens them?

* -- I mean the original novel Dracula, not all the adaptations.
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, I was aiming for the classical (and by classical I mean literature) vampires rather than... well... other depictions of those monsters.
Besides, the origin story of those vampires is pretty unique and there is a reason why they suffer in sunlight and have all sorts of other traits.
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markoatonc Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
Hmmm. wież eto już stare ale dopiero teraz na to trafiłem. Świetna seria, styl wydaje się być coraz lepszy z rysunku na rysunek.
I to znaczy że słońce jest dla nich bolesne, ale nie czyni żadnej faktycznej krzywdy? Ciekawe.
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dzięki :D
mam już szkice do 2 następnych, tylko czasu brak...

styl się poprawia, bo się uczę =P

co do słońsa, to nie jest przyjemne, a nawet bolesne, jak wampir stoi bezpośrednio w świetle, a na dodatek zabiera im wszelkie dodatkowe zdolności. innymi słowy w świetle słońca wampir nie ginie, ale jest bezbronny i cierpi.
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markoatonc Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
OK. logiczne, po prostu wersji wampirów jest tyle co ludzi, więc wolałem się upewnić.
Poza tym w opisie do tego obrazu brakuje linka do
Monsters in the night

A tam zaś brakuje linka do tego, chyba że tak miało być.
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
naprawie tam te opisy jak dorobie następny obrazek. mam już do tego szkic  i część literacją :D

a co do wampirów, to się zgadzam, jest tyle wersji, ilu autorów. Przynajmniej te moje nie błyszcza w słońcu :XD:
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markoatonc Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
*'wiem, że'
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Atael Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Wyraźnie widać emocje na twarzach, cool, ale cały czas oczy mi uciekają na baner, na którym mam wrażenie, że jest rogata postać z wielkim lolem na mordzie :D
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...
cannot unsee <_<
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CranberryMint Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap:
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:iconadalbertus:
Adalbertus Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:bow:
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temporos Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is there a fic that goes along with this series of images?
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
there will be... I think.
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Jelenadbz Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
cool
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mariobros64 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
This is very awesome and beautiful, I love it, I can feel the pain of Dash and Twilight, maybe can be vampires but they are the same in thee other aspects
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :D
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mariobros64 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
they are vampires but they aren't evil:D
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
vampires aren't evil just like wolves aren't evil for hunting rabbits, they just do what they need to eat and survive.
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mariobros64 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Well, vampires are not evil, they do it principally for survive.
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
indeed
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:iconmariobros64:
mariobros64 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Yeah, I like vampires
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've noticed ;)
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Ghouleh Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
...I wondered if you would ever draw vampire-Twilight meeting Celestia after her transformation. We're all waiting for it now. I'm sure you'll do an amazing job at it!
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes, I will draw it when the story gets to that point... and I figure out where I want it to go in the long run :D
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MajeczkaSlasher Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Piękne!
Rarity - wampir?
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tak, cała trójka na obrazku. :D pasuje do nich, prawda? =P
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MajeczkaSlasher Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Niom :p
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Vampirkaa Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! Jedna z Twoich najlepszych prac :nod: Bardzo mi się podoba.
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
to fajnie :)
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Vampirkaa Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No wiem ^_^
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Catkotek Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ładne :).
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dzięki :D
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JedielDaniel Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hell, yeah!!! This is it! One of the best. Probably the best in Your vampire series. The shading is just amazing. Especially around the parts, where the line of light touches the ponies! It's simply beautifully made :nod:

And You know, I can't help but comment on Rarity's hairs (especially mane). These are just stunning. Every digital artist should learn how to draw good hairs from this picture :D

You absolutely overdid Yourself with this one! I'm really impressed :wow:
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GD has a different opinion on the shading =P

As for Rarity's mane... yeah, it looks nice, but I'm not really happy with it. The more I look at it the less I like it to be honest :D
I still like her face though... and the banner. The banner is the probably the best part. :D
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gonedreamer Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nie mówię że cienie są złe, mimo wszystko wyglądają świetnie. Poza tym nie jestem jakimś specem. Tylko zwróciłam uwagę, jeśli chciałbyś, żeby wyglądało to bardziej naturalnie. :P
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nie jesteś specem :o


=P

wiem o co Ci chodzi z cieniami i wiem, że skopałem je trochę, ale skoro nadal się da to oglądać to chyba jest ok :D
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JedielDaniel Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You know it's always like this... the more You look, the less, You like (with some exceptions of course ^^;) Her face is really good, I must admit, an the banner was a really nice touch... but I still stand by my opinion ^_^
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not going to look at it too much :D
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Kalimdor89 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Przyda się link do |Beginning|.
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:iconadalbertus:
Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dodam jak dopiszę tam historię =P
ale masz: [link]
:D
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Kalimdor89 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Spoko. To normalne wampiry, tj. wbijasz kołek w serducho i pada tak?
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jak to ktoś na którejś z sesji w VtM powiedział do młodego łowcy wampirów: "Ciekawe czy ty byś uciekał z *** kołkiem w klacie" =P

czyli tak :D
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Spetsnaz-Marksman Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
O-O This is an intense story.
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:iconadalbertus:
Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's a good thing, right? =P
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Spetsnaz-Marksman Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Yeah! I wanna RP this again! That was the best one ive ever done to be honest. XD
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah, it was fun and don't worry, I predict two more pictures from the series and the story will get back to... well... other ponies :D
so we can RP some more when we get there.
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Spetsnaz-Marksman Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Yay! XD
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gonedreamer Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bardzo podoba mi się ten styl włosów, który używasz już od jakiegoś czasu. Tutaj szczególnie Rarity dobrze wygląda. Utrzymałeś także trochę mroczną, tajemniczą atmosferę. Uczepie się jednak do cieniowania na postaciach i ich cieniach. Te bliżej światła są tak samo rozmyte jak te w głębi pomieszczenia, a powinny być ostrzejsze (np. gdzie kopyto styka się z podłogą). Oko Twi jest trochę za daleko od mordki, chyba zapomniałeś dodać cienia do oka RD i nie widać czy ma drugie skrzydło, czy nie.
Ogólnie jest coraz lepiej, w nóżkach też. :D
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Adalbertus Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Chyba zacznę przez Ciebie debugować obrazki :D
cieni już nie poprawię niestety, przynajmniej w tej wersji.
Oko Twi, masz rację, już poprawiłem
oko RD, cień był, ale warstwa była wyłączoną z jakiegoś powodu
o skrzydle faktycznie zapomniałem :D ale jest quick fix, mam nadzieję, że nie pogarsza sytuacji =P
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gonedreamer Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dobrze jest. :) A przynajmniej według mnie.
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