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Steam-powered Love

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ok... so.... steampunk and AppleDash combined
You didn't expect that, did you? :D
this is a birthday gift for :iconnastylady:
Happy Birthday, RoRo :D I hope you'll like it
if not, that it's all Mach's fault because I was asking him about your favorite things and he said AppleDash (amoung other things)
Anyways, I hope you had fun today
Best wishes and stuff :D
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I find the dark, romantic atmosphere very appealing and the smoky effect that envelops the main subjects enhances the emotions you are expressing. Overall, you've shown creativity by combining the theme of love with steampunk and have visually depicted it in a very beautiful style.

However, while I enjoy the setting and the way you have posed these ponies, it doesn't show the steampunk style as much as it could have. Although I notice Rainbow's goggles and various accessories, it can be made more distinguishable as steampunk and also make the piece more eye-catching.

Experiment with crazy ideas! Steampunk is all about dials, pipes, gears, springs and other MECHANICAL components being used for the visual appearance. One nice and perhaps overused method of doing this is a synthetic limb, and that always captures the viewer.

Feel free to 'critique my critique' as this is my very first one.